by CindyTV
Nicely done just a couple of continuity errors, Blake becomes Bob and at one point You call Dani Olivia. Nothing a reread wouldn’t fix. Really enjoying the story and you tell it well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This was a well written (for the most part) and I can't wait to find out what happens next
That's one was to get rid of a "husband" that's in the way. Bravo! So much for the wife's promise to keep the husband though.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
I really enjoyed the story and how it was told. I loo forward to reading more about how Olivia and Dani move forward with their lives together and with their new friends.
Beautiful story and hopefully Dani and Olivia start sharing the men together. I hope they stay together and start loving cock while they are together. They seam to love each other very much and the story is better when they are having sex with each other. Then throw the men in the mix would be hot.
Very hot. Just loved it. Always wanted to meet a guy like Hawk. Waiting for what comes next. xoxo, Di
I to like the story. Was wondering when the next part was coming so it has a complete ending. You typically finish your stories. Not have them with what happens now.
Keep writing your are excellent
Excellent Story, Please continue! So many ways to go. Is Hawk's dream a glimpse into the future? Or do Olivia and Dani stay together?
Very well-written and very erotic! I love that his wife nurtured and supported his femininity.
This transgender story beautifully explores identity, resilience, and acceptance. The protagonist's journey is both moving and enlightening, shedding light on the complexities of gender and self-discovery. 5 Big Stars.
I actually cried at the ending. That's never happened before. What an emotional roller coaster ride. Well Done! 5 Big Stars!