It's Not Always What it Seems Pt. 03

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What they left us with wasn't "life changing" money but at least we weren't destitute.

The note was hand-written, in an envelope, at the front desk. I hadn't even thought to ask if there might be something when I wasn't expecting anything, but the following morning the clerk asked if I wanted my mail.

"Jim,

I guess by now you've figured out that you're never going to see us again. You really were a nice guy, as I told Cassie the other day, if I were ever going to really like a man, it would be you. You were the first man in years that I didn't have to use lube with all the time.

I really was sorry about Kathy, too, she was such a nice girl. But after she told us about you and your capabilities, we knew you were what we needed. It's just that she didn't want to go along, and when she was going to spill the beans, we couldn't let her do that. We'd planned this for so long and she was going to ruin it. It made a perfect excuse, blaming her death on the Senator and, getting you to help. I couldn't do it; Cassandra had no problem taking care of her however, she said it was just like when she'd done the guy that had molested her for years just before she left her home for good. We didn't take it all, as you probably now know, we left you each 1% of what we transferred into each account, figured you'd earned that much.

It wasn't signed.

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Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed and were confounded by the twists. I've heard from many that once they knew the outcome, they had to go back as they realized there were many clues in Chapter 1 that they had missed.

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I had a feeling they were using him, but I totally disnt see them as responsible for Kathy. I agree that a BTB is unnecessary, and that a female mastermind is a good change of pace, but I would still love to see a sequel. Not because Steph an Cassie deserves punishment, but because Kathy deserves somekind of justice.

BenLongBenLongabout 1 year agoAuthor

I actually hate “Bash the Bitch” or “Burn the Bitch” stories. Always told from a dominant, misogynistic, sexist male viewpoint where women are inferior and “doing their man wrong.” I thought it was an appropriate change to reverse the roles, which I did in this story.

Why can’t a woman plan and execute an ultimate con like this? Each of the comments to date saying that the girls should be found and burned at the stake or turned back into whores or white slaves and the like, implicitly want the male to “win” - whether they said it or not. They can’t stand it that the woman/women won.

OhiobenzOhiobenzabout 1 year ago

Should have a follow up conclusion where the bitches are tracked and burned... Steph left with the only option as a street hooker in some country with a passport to exit and Cassie as a white slave in a 3rd world whore house where she gets all the dick she hates....

his_sweethearthis_sweetheartabout 2 years ago

Niiiice I love it.👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

DeCourcyDeCourcyover 2 years ago

Seems like Larry, at least, should have thought about this possibility and set up a couple more accounts at the offshore bank to transfer his and Jim's money to before the girls could get to it. Otherwise, it's a decent sting story.

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