All Comments on 'It's Only a Test'

Congratulations, that was a very good story. A great first effort.

Marsha keep writing more stories. You're going to be an excellent story teller, your descriptions are very vivid and real.

Very enjoyable. Please keep writing. You show a talent for it that will, I am sure, improve over time. Your tale was well told and the characters were very good. Please keep entertaining us!

Gave me a boner all the way through reading it. Hot,hot, hot!

melt down,indeed! wonderfully told story, very erotic,very complete and descriptive without a load of four letter rhetoric. only wish my praise could be told as well as your story!

please write more,

don

This was a very good story you wrote. I felt like I was there watching and I could see the thoughts clearly on what was going through her mind. Very well done!! Can't wait to see the next one.

This was a very good story you wrote. I felt like I was there watching and I could see the thoughts clearly on what was going through her mind. Very well done!! Can't wait to see the next one.

i must admit, it took a little getting into but once characters were established it was very enjoyable. your writing style is very unique and descriptive. keep up the good work.

as far as a first story goes, I would have never known you weren't a novice at this. Kept me wanting more. Such a fantasy of my own, I felt like I was there with you.

Great first story, and hopefully not the last!