All Comments on 'Jack and Phoebe Ch. 06'

This is an epic story and I'm really getting into the characters. Can't wait to see exactly what made Aria dislike Phoebe, how Tom reconciles his problems, how Maggie and Jack develop, and all the kinky stuff they get up to together.

The only suggestion I'd make is a minor formatting one. When you change the character scene (like from Jack, Phoebe and Stephanie together and then you change to Maggie) it can be a bit sudden. I feel it would be easier to read if you added a bit more whitespace or a break/heading of some sort..