All Comments on 'Jamie's Perfect Life Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is a great series developing to unknown levels of eroticism. Can hardly wait.

The hard part, however, is this installment has quite a few spelling errors. Perhaps reading aloud would help identify these?

EverythingfunEverythingfunalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Glad to hear you are enjoying! Yeah I probably should read them aloud but my schedule doesn't really work for that. I'm really only able to work on my stories while on break at the office. Or if I'm up and my partner is asleep. I appreciate the criticism and will try to be more careful while proofreading in the future 🤗 happy reading!

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