All Comments on 'Jamie's Transformation'

A very good story with lots of intresting posibilities for the future

Oh yes! I look forward to the next installment.

More adult bookstore, older men!

I don't know if this is a first time story (if so, it is fairly good - for a first time story). But this really isn't a five by any stretch of what a five should mean. There is minimal character development, stiff dialog, minimal (and predictable) plot, and the sex scenes are ok but repetitious.

It isn't a total loss: there are few spelling errors and grammatical mistakes - but that's not what I read for.

How do you rate the really good stories if you give this one a five???

The story has a good approach and gets very hot. That despite the horrible grammar, using wrong qords and wrong tense etc., etc., This should have been a 4+

Get a grammar/spell checker or use the editors to help. Wording was very often so bad it stalled the story completely until I figured out what you were trying to say.

When Jamie reviewed the experiments, I couldn't tell which Jamie was featured - the one on video, or the one reviewing.

I liked it though there were some grammer problems. Probably a rough draft. I like the way the last guy did a typo while trying to talk bad about the grammer on his post lol. qord for word... funny.

started ok. yes, some grammar and spelling bad. Ending with DAD was SICK. Incest. this is where paedaphiles come from.

High school grades! Don't take any job offered so easily. You could get hypnotised into becoming a slut. This could happen to YOU! (you wish)

Despite some grammer mistakes, this is a good hot yarn.