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by OhBillyART

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CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker605 months ago

I do hope there’s a part two and so on. Good start.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This would be heartily improved by the use of actual quotation marks and grammar for dialogue. Couldn't get past it.

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Semi-retired looking for some guidance on writing some stories.