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Anonymous13 days agoSo I am liking this new take I really like how more quickly Jess is getting corrupted however I feel like we need her point of view more and see her thoughts and what the husband doesn’t see. But I also think if we are going to look at Wills view we should see him be more manipulated too, maybe when he visits Jess at work or at another work gathering the others push other female staff to distract, flirt while not only letting them do more with Jess since he is distracted but also push her further down making her act put of jealousy or thinking she does more since he won’t give her enough. Those were my thoughts but hope to see more
Anonymous2 months agoGood story! Deff agree we need
More live in the moment action as opposed to just after the fact watching
seanmiller2 months agoGreat story as always PH! I loved the dialogues - very well written! But I'd try adding a little more "live experiences" instead of focusing solely on Jess telling Will about them in retrospect. This is why I liked the scene with the coworkers and think there's a lot of potential there. Excited for more - be it Lana or Jess :-)
potatoHead422 months agoAuthorThanks everyone for the comments, feedback and suggestions!
I wanted to try something different here and expand my writing skills. Naive Teacher was the first public things I ever wrote, so I needed to practice some more. My plan is to go back to it now.
Thanks, PH
Anonymous2 months agoSorry but this Jessica series just lost me. 4 or 5 side chapters in nearly a year and you couldn't bother updating your main? Talk about losing sight of what matters...
