All Comments on 'Joanne's Fall Pt. 10 – Broken'

First, kudos on the extra long chapter and intensity. A bit repetitive, lacking public humiliation, but overall excellent. Thank you for the speed of the posts. Anything less than a 5 would be unfair.

I loved this chapter as well as all the others. I love that you are continuing this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this.

i like the story, but this one chapter got a little long for me. i ususallly like th longer chapters, joanne is just lost her mind on this chapter

I love the story but this chapter was a little boring (unreal, no surprises, too obedient). What really excited me was the introduction of Tom. This is really promising. Hope there’s a bit of incest and Tom tries hard to save his mother.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow! What a turn! Great job

Such crap

Fantastic, fun, and fucking hot

Chapter 10 is a new and beautiful idea, but it is less exciting than the previous chapters. I hope it continues to slide in the coming chapters. She gets more tattoos and gets more sex. She becomes a secretary inside her company. She gets bullied by the employees at the company at work. She gets publicly insulted and humiliated. In the company, and for the new manager to fire her and send her to work in a restaurant or bar Also, get bigger breasts and lips Focusing on clothing, weight reduction and food is important I hope her son and husband stay away and not know anything I hope that there will be a speed in editing the next parts. This story is great and great work

This chapter is fun. I hope you continue this story until chapter 30. It's really fun

great story

I hope you get a navel ring, your work is amazing

I'm reading the story now It's really great work, JOANNE'S humiliation must go on She must be bullied by teens Take to the beach to get a tan Fuck teens near the beach Lose weight and get muscle It's hot to send her to the street to work as a whore on the weekends Please continue editing this wonderful story

amazing story

great story

Great

Fun and hot story keep going

And the hits just keep on coming. When is she going to get another piercing?