All Comments on 'Judgement'

Love it

the only thing worse than a bitch that cheats is a self righteous prick thats been cheating too. burn them all

What a pair! I thought the house might be "accidentally" and settle the case.

5

Destroyed, I might to say!

That story is so fucked up I could see it could happen somewhere in crazy America…the love of a house superseding the laws of attraction and love. Wow!

The strange part for me was the side piece dude that claimed he and the wife were more than just lovers. She claimed the same - he was her 2nd husband. And he was ok being her 2nd choice for over 20 years? Are we supposed to believe he just stayed a single man and became friends with her husband? The main characters marriage didn't make sense.

Though I still enjoyed and appreciated the story.

Wow, Great Read! Very interesting! All the hate turned around. The punch in the face was a big surprise I bet. LOL, I loved this story. Well, Written, Good story, Great effort, Great Ending. I love a happy ending. 5 big blazing stars for this story. Thanks for Writing. Buster2U

I like it, it was different take on love

They loved the house more than each other!

Yeah they both deserve a nasty outcome and what's to say she won't go behind his back. No way for the hubby to ever know

Their last name was Plunger so I expected the whole story to be a setup for a joke about a clogged toilet. I’m disappointed.

The story of two horrible people who deserve each other. Nothing redeeming about them

Can't really get behind this story. Writing was great. Character development was too, I ended up intensely disliking Ros and mentally shouting at Jimmy. Michael? I wanted to take a cricket bat to Michael! Ros was thinking that wealth is equivalent to forgiveness of sin while Jimmy is playing Martin Luther. Ros's attitude is all to prevalent with wealthy people. I am rich so I don't have to abide by commoners rules. I can sleep around, it's expected of my station in life. I can subject my spouse to humiliation, they just have to learn to deal with it. They can have their own dalliances, as long as I approve of them. Ros cheated first. Admitted to developing an emotional attachment with Michael that was equally binding to her as hers with Jimmy. And Jimmy nailed it by telling her it was stronger because she choose to maintain her adulterous relationship when it became obvious that it was hurting her husband. That is not love.

Terrible, terrible people 1*

This made me smile. And I love the use of Jimmy Plunger in the stories.

I liked it. Needed be about page or two longer. The intervention scene would have been great.

His major mistake was to become friendly with the lover boy and use their home to fuck around! 20 years of this and the marriage would NEVER survive what happened!

Ahhh! Finally an answer to the age old question ‘when is a marriage not a marriage?’ Clearly when a couple of really skanky pieces of shit get together and play make believe.

Highly dislikable characters and so is this awful tale.

Silly 21 years just for a large one, husband accepting it until a golf loss insult, fiction can only go so far

Sorry, bud, I've read some of your better things. This isn't one of them. The Bear just tossed his cookies. Do better next time.

The BEAR

Nope, twenty years putting up with complete disrespect while telling him to "grow up" or "check his ego" is bull shit. Cheating skank slut and sissy wimp husband are the worst.

Only one mistake, 20 years ago when she said people of our class don't care about infidelity. He should have said sorry but I do and walked away from the whore then.

Pretty well written, and an enjoyable read, but I have difficulty believing Jim is the slowest burn in male history. It took him 21 years to finally say “enough”? And hypocrisy is his middle name, as well, after his enjoying having dozens of willing women over those same 21 years. I don’t think the psychology quite works for either one of these two morally bankrupt fools. But hey, it’s your universe, and given the principle of infinite diversity, it truly takes all kinds.

Didn’t grab me at all, put me off my tea as a matter of fact

Scores 2-3/5 no more though.

Loved this F’d up story, you always write these silly stories. Thank you for writing…... It allows me to hide from the world for a short time. 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love it! It grinded on him all those years then, boom! It didn't matter anymore. Once dipshit popped off at the mouth, the fuse was lit. It was pretty funny and I'm glad it worked out.

Not a good story, no sympathy for any of the characters, waste of time

I thought Michael would buy the house.

Interesting approach to the age old divorce battle. I thought their stubborness might lead to the old "cut down the middle" scenario. Sort of like the wisdom of Solaman and the threatened cutting of the child in two. LOL. Anyway, many thanks. Cheers.

Thumbs up for bucking the usual BTB nonsense. A refreshing take on “be careful what you wish for” that didn’t discriminate between both characters.

Solid.

1 star - not a great idea - there is nothing 'loving' about it.

That was certainly interesting, I don't even know what to say about it, but it did make me ask myself why Jack wouldn't just hire some goons to lick the shit outta Mike, say every 3 months for however long it would take for him to realize having his way with Ros wouldn't be worth the pain. Would you really want her as a side piece when you have your leg/arm in a cast half the year? A wealthy man could find very constructive ways to make a wayward wife's long term prospects evaporate.

Now that was WEIRD!!

Ouch. She was very stubborn. Hard to reconcile that. His demands were minor. All she did was say, " no way", fight him for a year and then say, "actually, can we go back to your reasonable request?"

He missed the chance to find true love. Now he's stuck with her. That sucks. But they're rich and fuck around. I guess that's something

"I'd seen him in the shower his cock hung longer soft than mine with my strongest erection I knew that Ros was tied to fucking that thing and she said not only was it huge but he was an incredible lover." - PUNCTUATION!! "I'd seen him in the shower [Period] his cock hung longer soft than mine with my strongest erection [Period] I knew that Ros was tied to fucking that thing [Comma] and she said not only was it huge but he was an incredible lover."

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"Grow up Jimmy, grow up" - Why is the person who wants a faithful spouse the one who's told to "grow up?" What's more immature than wanting to have your cake and ear it too?

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"I have decided that the property be placed on the open market and the sale proceeds will be spilt 50:50." - I thought of that earlier, especially on his part, especially since he didn't really care about the house except for not letting her have it.

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"disappearing like snow of a ditch" - What does that mean?

Both these people suck, both the dirty whorewife and the cuck. You would have to feel for the children in a situation like this.

Another nice quicky!

I must admit, the fun of writing these crap stories for me is the comments. Thank you for brightening my day, some come from a place that clearly did some speed reading before ejaculating the comments so just to clarify:

- 2 people of extravagent wealth, as is spelt out, to a degree where any punitive divorce conditions are more or less irrelevant

- 2 people who have long since accepted that the social morality so dear to 'the little people' i.e. the rest of us, are irrelevant, so they spend 20 years fucking who each wishes whilst conducting the type of living arrangements that suit both.

- Nirvana is blown to hell by the moronic large cocked lover, a crisis forms. a resolution is found, the status quo is reestablished, they all live happily ever after, baring old big cock who gets a good kicking for his pains and cut off from the woman he has very clearly become attached to.

OK, I could just have written those few lines and left it there but where is the fun in that. Anyway, it's just a silly fucking story, have a very lovely, lovely day.

Your stories are usually good but this one sucks big time

Hate the ending. Would be better if either of these happened:

1) Jimmy kept up the divorce and forced the sell of the house just to get even with Ros for what Michael said on the golf course.

2) reconciliation only after ending all extramarital sex for both of them, selling the house, and moving across the country to where they did not know anyone to start over just the 2 of them

I'm sorry that I read this crap. I have liked some of your other stories. There is nothing to like here.

My thoughts are that they have agreed on a lifestyle that most people would find strange at best. It certainly wouldn't be my idea of how to live life. However, we live in a world where people can identify as cats or anything they want and we are just expected to go along with that. So, people who agree to an alternative lifestyle aren't that strange. While reading the story I thought his solution should have been to burn the house down. With their money, buying a new house wouldn't make them blink. Even if one bought out the land the house would not be the same. Lastly, people with no jealousy in their makeup must be few and far between. Maybe they were made for each other.

I guess this story was supposed to be humorous, or ironic? It was embarrassing, reminding us that you can take the Trash out of the trailer but you can't take the trailer mentality out of the Trash. You would think after 20 years and all his money he could have arranged for a plausible crippling accident or fatality for this wife's Fuck Master. Were we supposed to feel sorry for them or their family for all the rancor and contention? Hell, these two slags have nothing but complete contempt for each other, themselves, their children, their whole family and community: . . . because they are So Fucking Rich. Its enough to make you cheer the Leftists' tax policies. Just impoverish them and maybe they'll discover some basic human decency. I need to go wash my eyes out.

JimmyThePlunger,

Thank you for another good story. I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read. Please keep writing and having your own fun with it.

sbrooks103x

"I'd seen him in the shower his cock hung longer soft than mine with my strongest erection I knew that Ros was tied to fucking that thing and she said not only was it huge but he was an incredible lover." - PUNCTUATION!! "I'd seen him in the shower [Period] his cock hung longer soft than mine with my strongest erection [Period] I knew that Ros was tied to fucking that thing [Comma] and she said not only was it huge but he was an incredible lover." -

You must be reading Lit stories thinking that you would be reading world class novels.

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"Grow up Jimmy, grow up" - Why is the person who wants a faithful spouse the one who's told to "grow up?" What's more immature than wanting to have your cake and ear it too? -

I find it funny to see this comment from you. It is like you want to read stories as you had written them, rather than let the writers and their stories be as written. Like them do the work and you take the credit.

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"I have decided that the property be placed on the open market and the sale proceeds will be spilt 50:50." - I thought of that earlier, especially on his part, especially since he didn't really care about the house except for not letting her have it. -

Well of course YOU did.

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"disappearing like snow off a ditch" - What does that mean? Pay attention in life. Haven't you ever noticed that the snow melts first on a ditch!

Cute, thanks for writing

The idiot should have divorced her the first time she told him the other guys dick was better and he was a better lover. There is no real love here and not every woman is a size queen. 3 stars is the best I could do.

sbrooks103x WROTE : "disappearing like snow off a ditch" - What does that mean? Pay attention in life. Haven't you ever noticed that the snow melts first on a ditch!

Good God man did you read what you wrote. Of course the snow melts first on a ditch hence the expression - "disappearing like snow off a ditch". It's not fucking complicated. WTF were you thinking?

Tut Tut

Yea, stay together for the sake of the house. Cuck crap.

He hasnt been boinking the wife? Guess i wouldnt boink that stretched out Cunt either. Hubby is a piece of work too, cheating POS just like her

Nah.

Garbage is what garbage does.

Maybe the kids don't suck. Everyone else in this story does.

Great story. Gave it five stars. Just wish it was longer.

Entertaining story.