by Gortmundy
What a wonderful chapter. It was so well written with a really delicious combination of erotic pain and pleasure.
I still absolutely adore this story.
The human being with his/her flaws and in all his/her glory plays such a crucial role.
It's amazing how you got me from absolutely hating the slaver-scum rich-bitch to genuinly rooting for her.
I have no idea how the Shona strand will work with the Margo strand of this story, but the Margo strand has most of my interest right now.
I have to say the interaction between the Warden trainee Miss Valentine, the two inmates, nurse and Wardens right before, during and after the training session was absolutely incredible. Especially when the trainee Miss Valentine almost climaxes from her whipping and everyone watching knew it. Leaving Miss Valentine on the verge of a climax had a delightful effect. It was a wonderful little cliffhanger.
Great dialogue ! I can’t believe I have just read a judicial punishment story with a constant grin on my face.