All Comments on 'Julie's Bet'

The grammar errors made this I possible to read. Use available resources and try again.

I enjoyed your story. It felt like you were telling a personal account. Just some feedback. You may want to use Gammarly.com or Ginger to help iron out some details. I know it has been helpful for me. Keep writing!

"Too good not to be better" was what an English professor used to stamp on student papers. He had another stamp: "I stopped reading here." I finished the story, so the first stamp, "Too good . . . ," fits this review. Please consider creating a story with a grammar checker before submitting it. Doing so would definitely improve the readability of your writing and raise the number of stars I would award.

i loved the accent keep it in further stories