All Comments on 'Just Another Day In Paradise Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
SEXY!!

THAT STORY WAS SOOOO SEXY !!!!!

U SHOULD MAKE MORE WWE STORIES

THEY HAVE SEXY GUYS

US GIRLS CAN UNDERSTAND

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting..

The Story Was Interesting But You Sure Do Fantasize!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Uh, right.

..... This is seriously just gross. Proof you're a kid alright.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Get a little more real...

not very realistic; as in size and space

Dice_CasdenDice_Casdenabout 16 years ago
Nice effort

Outside of a few wording problems, it's good. Good luck with future projects.

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