All Comments on 'Just Being Wolfy Ch. 10'

You know what I love most about your stories? You don't drag things out. They're fun, sexy, and very intense, but you never drag out complications needlessly. Oh, and the happy ending -- I adore happy endings :D I can't wait for more!

I definitely agree with the comment below. You dont drag things out like alot of people tend to do. I have to say, this chapter was unpredictable. Haha if you think about it, having jerry suddenly realize his love for fiorelle is the appropriate ending but somehow i thought it would be different .. haha but this chapter was great nonetheless

"What are you doing?" he asked him witheringly (OMG!!! It's supposed to be 'her' not 'him'!! Why the heck did I type 'him'??? I've never made this type of mistake before lol!!!) Thank you guys for the comments and votes! The next chapter's coming tomorrow!! Hope you guys love it!

I think that Jerry's actions are believable, considering his thoughts and feelings mentioned in the last chapter. I too agree, and am thrilled that you didn't draw out the fight and add other complications.

Ok!Ok!Ok! So he didn't get his throat torn out but he came damn close...I guess I can live with that.:-( Since he didn't hurt Gracielle and the babies and James didn't get to injured I guess it's only fair that he gets to live. However, if Fiorelle's father decides to still tear his throat out I will be a very happy camper even though I still don't like her.:-) Great chapter.

While I do like the speed at which the previous chapters read, this one just seemed to progress a bit to fast and got confusing at points. I think all the scenes could have been drawn out just a tad more to give a better picture of what was going on. It was still worth the read though.

I have loved this story sines the writing has gotten so much better and the flow of the chapters has improved greatly. this one in my opinion should have been drawn out it two separate ones. that would have made it flow better. I still love this story and cant wait for more. so hurry up lol

It didn't go the way I was sure it would.

That is AWESOME. I love when I am surprised by a direction!

This was a good chapter but i have to admit i liked the pace and plot development more in your other chapters. It was a bit fast, Jerry went from a complete idiot to a remorseful wolf in one sentence; a little more development and suspense would have been great. That said...i am still loving this story and your work!!!! Can't wait for the happy ending that i hope is coming :)

I really liked this series, but I have to say, this installment left me a bit unsatisfied. I agree with former reviews, that the development was too fast in this part (surely, we have to blame those readers who were desperately waiting for the continuation and urging you on *g*) But what really bothered me was this sob stuff. Okay, the other parts were a bit sappy too, but this was over the top hokey. Less is more!

After all the evil shit Jerry did and literally two minutes after he tried to rape her, not to mention breaking her soulmate bond to trick her mate into thinking she's dead, she immediately forgives him? That's bullshit. There's NO way that's plausible. Then everyone else falls in line and forgives him too? James forgives a man that tried to kill him and rape his soulmate? Fiorelle forgives him for raping her, sleeping around, physically hurting her, and treating her like a complete piece of shit? Ugh

I have to agree with the comment under mine.

I loved all the chapters thus far but I feel like this one was rushed.

With all the evil acts Jerry commited and all he gets is a slap on the back.

O.O

I dont know, I guess I just wish there was more.

i dislike this nice neat ending talk about an anticlimax (no pun intended)

I don't believe this shit!!! Great story tho

Oh, HELL NO! Punk-arsed Jerry needs to be strung up by his little-wolfy bits until they fall off!

I'm just sayin'...