All Comments on 'Just One Drink Ch. 04'

PLEASE don't let her get broken, please let her win, please let her put that jerk in his place, he needs to get his comeuppance so bad, I really hope you will let her get out of this

Whores fake orgasms. So do most porn stars. Why? Because it’s a fucking job! Literally on both counts.

“Oh look. I’m such a slave to orgasms that if James tells me to rape a child, I will because I have no free will. If he tells me to rob a bank and kill the hostages, I will because his opinion is the only thing that matters. If he tells me to decapitate my family, I will because he’s my master and nothing else matters so long as I get an orgasm.”

Do you see how idiotic that sounds? Well, thats how stupid your story sounds. You’re not broken, you’re an idiot who shouldn't be allowed to write anything except a grocery list and even then, only if someone is supervising.

Loving where the story is going. Violet's reluctant acceptance of her future is very arousing.

I love it so much

Very nice, and a good job of dealing with her inner turmoil. I like the slow pace, but wish the chapters were longer, especially this last one. Cliff-hangers, for the record, suck.

Well, this chapter wasn't sexy, but now I'm even more invested on how the story resolves.

James's reaction in the alley could mean many things, wonder what he'd do if she does do what the hooker told her.

She's getting there. Now filling in for a prostitute. How much deeper will she sink? Only the author knows.

~B