All Comments on 'K Goes to the Psychiatric'

A good start but ended too quick

you lack any details. Hes on you, in you, oh done. there is no meat to these bones, nothing to enjoy. you set up a scenario but failed to flesh it out. The start is promising but there is a lot to he desired here.

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I will rewrite the story soon and add some details.

it was too quick. Need more

This is just an outline of what could be a wonderful story. Also 2nd person point of view is not good..

Agree with anonymous, "you lack any details. Hes on you, in you, oh done." She's a virgin? You'd have to play with her body before you are "in her and out" of her. Fondling etc., would come first. There could be resistance and pain. A virgin could very probably NoT know how to orgasm.

Really please learn about the human body and how it performs and sex.