All Comments on 'Kaitlyn's Rules Ch. 06'

While I am enjoying the story I think you're missing any indication of consent from the subject for most of what has been added. This is taking a very dark turn

Cant wait for your next chapter :)

you have a very good style but it seems to me that something is missing. He seems too flat, too passive.

Would it be possible to ask the POV= Point Of View of him? Why is he so enthusiastic about being submissive?

It happens, I understand, but why?

Then, I understand that Kaitlyn was already an expert dominatrix with a dream wardrobe, and that Delaney fits in from the first minute as an expert, but isn't it a bit too simple?

Some feminine insecurity, some guilt, some doubt?

I love this story so much, I hope there is many more chapters to follow!!! :)-

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