All Comments on 'Karen tries a threesome'

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MigbirdMigbird7 months ago

Like the way you describe/introduce your characters — we can easily visualize Karen, after all, but Kylie and even Eddie: “His eyes darted between the two women, like a machine gathering data to analyse,…. “. The erotic Karen’s moments with a Kylie so intense — a beautiful blend of sensual and graphically overwhelming. The concluding threesome DP less so and not because of the scene itself rather description less erotic, mechanical - detumescent. Love what you’re doing/exploring with Karen and the characters you’ve shared with her — very creative moments.

EkphrasisEkphrasis7 months agoAuthor

@Migbird. Thank you so very much.

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