All Comments on 'Katie Moves In Ch. 04'

Oh thats wonderful, I hope now they are a couple and family be damned. You cant help who your heart loves the most. Maybe now they can start making babies.

Okay, this shit was way past due. This chapter was ten times better than the last three were. They have known each other for all of their lives and it takes an entire week to profess their love?

I have a favorite cousin that I have crushed on my entire life. My mother was the oldest of six children and her mother was the youngest. My cousin doesn't reciprocate my feelings, so I never made a pass at her. But trust me, if she had ever let me get closer to her, I would have gone for broke. I would've grabbed on and held tight with both hands. I would have professed my love and moved mountains to prove it.

Thanks for finally getting there.

So now another break in continuity, this time of 12 months.

I give up, it's not worth getting into a story that's never going to be finished.

Oh more please. don't leave us hanging like this