All Comments on 'Kayaks and Wine, Oh My!'

As written it didn't bother me that he shared his wife and I felt that in some cases I bet he gets an extra woman on the side. But who wears a jean shirt kayaking? That really was a turn off.

"...Artie pulsed his meat in and out of her pussy and ass..."

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You didn't write that he switched back and forth, but the writing implies he somehow did both at the same time. That may not have been what you intended, but that is what you wrote.