KDS Construction Pt. 04

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So, I guess that you nosy perverts wonder how we got like this. I wonder that myself sometimes. With all the attention that we were paying to my rhythms, we ignored Karen's. During some of the crazy sex we had around the holidays, two years ago, somehow some of Dennis' potent semen got into Karen. I think that Denny had some good sex with her a couple of times. David may have transferred some from me to her. I conceived during the January ovulation. The boys were born seventeen days apart. The elder, Gregory, was named for David's late brother. Benjamin was named for my grandfather. I'm sure he will be 'Ben' one day.

As for the coupling, we just gravitated into Dennis being with me and David and Karen in love again. Dennis and David both have a son that will call them 'Dad'. We will tell Gregory the truth in ten years. Everyone is happy and our daughter will be born in a couple of months. She will be named Joni as a nod to my mother, Joan.

Love is Real

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Deleted Scene

[PapaBear] "Dennis, have you got a few minutes to tell about the time that you and David..."

[Dennis] "I guess so. Do you want me to tell about the first time he gave me a blowjob or about the time he fucked my ass raw with that big dick of his?"

[David] "What the fuck! Come on, Chief. You said we wouldn't tell that. Please just let it go. OK?"

[PapaBear] "I'll think about it, Dave. Some people like the gay stuff, and some don't."

[Dennis] "I don't mind telling it. It was great."

[PapaBear] "I know, Dennis, but I said I'd leave it out of this one. Miss Rita and I are going to tell of her adventures. She says that when she came here for the births of the boys, some wild shit happened. I'll save it for that chapter."

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Like I wrote before. This is a do-over of a story that I wrote long ago and lost. This effort is better and a little more believable. I feel like I didn't do well on this one. I knew where I wanted to go and then forced the story there.

"KDS Construction" = Kids Construction or Karen-David-Sandy or some silly shit like that.

Cumming this summer: The Adventures of House-girl Rita

This 'David' character is NOT Donna's brother from "Summer Heat."

Please check out my other stories. Read, Rate, Comment. Trolls burn in Hell.

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PapaBear76PapaBear76over 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks NVDiceGuy

Thank you for reading this series. I admit that it is an overindulgent mess. The original version of it was worse. Please sample some of my other works.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 3 years ago

Totally fucked up scenario that has no plausible chance for success...... and yet you made it feel so natural simple. Great job. Loved the narrator jumping in occasionally

Only criticism is the changing of groups with the same story. While I found in loving wives at the beginning I would never have known where more chapters were if I had not decided to find the author’s works. While I also detest long winded teasers it would be good to suggest future chapters will be in different groups. I would have hated to miss out I. The entire series. On that note I see the first of a Rita series.

PapaBear76PapaBear76almost 4 years agoAuthor
Author's note.

Thanks again for reading this. Since I had written this before, it wasn't as enjoyable to write this time, too much like work. I just read it on here for the first time. It turned out better than I thought. A big thanks to the person that jumps on everything I write with a big "1 star". I'm glad others liked it.

I'm taking a break, although I have two stand alone stories unfinished.

I have ideas for three stories for a "House-girl Rita" series. It will be an anthology with each story able to stand alone. Rita may only be a supporting player in these, or she might be the star. Still thinking.

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