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Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

Fun fantasy within a fantasy elements. And we're you inspired by Gollum / Smeagol from Lord of The Rings for Keena's conversations with herself?

I also like how, even though this is a fantasy, it deals with some real life issues, as many couples have issues being honest about their sexual desires.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great descriptions, but nonexistant plot and rambling from one disconnected scene to another. To bad, because the scenes are hot.

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