All Comments on 'Kelley enjoys a Girls Night Out'

This was a really unbelievable story. For one, woman with 36D breasts wear bras for their benefit to make it easier to go about their business and to keep the breasts from sagging. And it is not possible to avoid stretch marks after having twins. Just seems author has no real life experience about what he is writing and is just silly.

Ignore the haters!!! Need a second chapter

and Pandora's box is now open...

Be careful what you wish for you might get it. If you want to be a cuck and have a skank wife have at it. Just remember this was your idea.

What you should have said is, "Now that I'm in my 50's I've lost my mind and become a sissy wimp cuck. Just stupid and completely unrealistic. Find a different hobby!

More please more.fantastic start

Outstanding. Great set-up, nice build... it's a believable pace.

Can't wait to see where it goes.

And soon they will be looking for their third marriages, the ignorance of this pathetic writer notwithstanding.

Sounds like something I would do. I never wear a bra.

Hey Someoneother, for a guy, you act like you know a lot about women's bodies. More than they do. But maybe you're a trans yourself, or just like dressing in panties probably.

great story. innocent and sexy all at once

There is something so hot about when a wife goes out without her husband. The mind plays trick on him as he's waiting at home.

A bit of advice to authors. leave the detailed descriptions out about these characters. Don't tell them a woman is 56, 5'-6" 150 pounds 36d-26-37. Leave some mystery. If you leave it vague, then each reader will conjure up their own ideal woman in their heads and enjoy the story more. by giving specifics you may end up describing someone that the reader might not find attractive as its not their type.

Great start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

This could become a very good series. Ignore the little minded anons

Great Story :D

Nice setup for your next story, which I just read. Love it, and want to read more from you.

Married women out on the town are a lot of fun. Males on the hunt, like me, zero in on the wedding band like it is a homing beacon. At the very least the "wife" is seeking affirmation that she can still attract a man's attention. Usually she is hoping for a groping feel, a hug, and a stolen (but returned) kiss to fuel her thoughts. Frequently a makeout session happens. Dance clubs and bars are poorly lit for a reason. There is no such thing as an "innocent" girls night out at a bar or dance club for women in their 30's or 40's. In Such a group, 1/3 are divorced and looking, 1/3 are on their 2nd or 3rd marriage, while most of the remaining third are bored or unsatisfied in their marriage. All Are horny and ripe for the picking.

Certainly well thought out and an enjoyable read. I do hope you continue!