All Comments on 'Kelsi's Adventures Ch. 05'

This is fucking hilarious. It's meant to be comedy or parody, right? All the chapters are the same, you don't know how to use basic punctuation and your characters have no lives, no thoughts or feelings, and do nothing except engage in stupid bondage nonsense. A woman squirting a "thick load"? LOL!

I feel I'm reading the wild fantasies of some post-pubescent, sweaty teenager. Very amusing.

WW2Mike did the best he could with his stories. I honestly don't think they were as bad as I originally believed it to be.