All Comments on 'Kidnapped and Traded'

by whosepetkitten

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
killed it

Ok, this was a good story, untill you completly killed it at the end. You should have made it so it was a test of her master, or that she ends up slowly falling for the new man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Just a thought

Your story is really touching and not really about sex, but if thats the case then may I suggest that you change his goal from desiring a trained slave into a wife of his own?

That way, the passion of your story will really bloom

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