by Kmaster3000
I read the original story by Semiater several years ago. I found it to be a little to dark even for my tastes. I like where you are going with this adaptation. My only suggestion and it is only suggestion is to bring Female Dom into the story. Otherwise I will keep an eye out for the next chapter to post.
Doesn't really work with the story line, got to keep it between the three guys. If you want a female Dom read my Moulding my Slave story for Mistress Karen.