All Comments on 'Landlord Pt. 03'

Anal?

Incorrect use of there/their/they're is kind of distracting

A fabulous luxury holiday for Emma. Even if it was a 'working holiday' ! A great end to a great 3-part story.

Fantastic story have enjoyed all 3 parts

I thoroughly enjoyed your three-part story, I was wet throughout and so wanted to be her.

However, during the story I couldn’t help but notice your use of the word there their and they’re it did lead to some distraction, I also noticed that you were used the word ‘AND’ to start a sentence, this is wrong.

Thank you so much and I do look forward to reading more of your stories.

Molly 14

Great story all 3 parts - each one got better and better. Good work and very hot!!!

Great story and got better as it progressed. I came really hard wanking over the part when the stewardess joined them. Thank you.