Lara Swift is Colonized Ch. 05

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"Here is my point, Miss Swift." the instructor said.

"Each of these girls are here being corrected, just like you. If you want to leave this place - ever - you will need to meet with our terms. You might not like the idea of giving away your title, and working for Mrs. Liao. It might offend you to offer to admit you need Lord Errol to not only be your guardian, but to also assume complete control over your vast estate. As for Robin? Well, you would have to work that out with her."

So it was Robin!

"But you will do these things. You've only had a small taste of what we can do so far. Can you imagine two years here? You would hardly be fit to leave! You would be totally institutionalized. There are a lot of examples of this happening to people."

The Polish woman went on, describing the affects of a long-term stay in this place.

"Decimation of life skills."

"Uncontrollable obsessions. Haven't you noticed that your mind doesn't seem to be your own sometimes?"

"I promise you, Lara: If you stay the entire two years here, you would have a hard time being anything except a domestic servant. You would be a half-mad, woefully repressed little nymphomaniac, who's even afraid of going outside!"

"So, maybe your thinking needs to shift. Because your earlier offers? They are off the table."

Lara's eyes shot open as she heard this news, and she was gripped by a familiar terror. Of course the offers had gotten worse!

"Mrs. Liao still wants your title and you to work for her, but she wants you to finish our domestic school beforehand so you won't embarrass her when you are told to wash the cum from her panties or something like that. Lord Errol, I have already told you his expectation: guardianship over you, and full control of the family fortune. In addition, he wants a salary for taking care of you. Without access to the old estate, you will need to find a way of personally earning that money to pay him. He would be your legal guardian, and you would have to follow his rules."

Lara reeled. It was the antipodal opposite of her old life! From a free-spirited heiress to a strictly micro-managed little debt slave. Toiling away to enrich the very bastard who stole everything from her. And working to provide him with money he didn't even need!

"So consider your attitude, pet. Because the question is not: will you get out of here with your silly title of nobility. That's already settled. The question is: will you get out of here at all?"

There it was.

Lara felt the snare tightening against her fragile, swan-like neck. Now she had to shift her behavior to in order to please these awful people? And what did she hope to win, at the end of it? A parole where people could freely exploit her in more personal ways? Was it really better than the alternative: a prolonged stay with Miss Galkowska that would certainly drive her as mad as that Russian model?

"Here is the most substantial change you must face," the Polish woman said gravely, interrupting Lara's rumination.

"Your life is no longer about achieving your own positive goals. Instead, you will focus all of your mental energy on avoiding negative outcomes. I know it sounds subtle, maybe even unimportant. But I guarantee you, it will be transformative. When you look at the world, you will no longer see all the bright things you could accomplish. Rather, you will see it as a frightening and overwhelming place. And your only hope for safety will be by conforming perfectly to your mistress' or master's demands. Regardless of their cruelty towards you."

"Enough for today's lesson, though," Miss Galkowska concluded. "Girls, everyone get ready for a trip to the cosmetics unit!"

Lara took her place one step behind Miss Galkowska and followed her down the hallway, unable to comprehend on how much danger she was in right now.

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newaccnewaccabout 6 years ago
I want more

I love this work and I can't wait to read the next part. The subtle ways in how they're changing her mind and thinking is amazing and hits all the right buttons for me. I love it, keep on going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent word artistry, but...

This author does a great job at what he does, which is describing the stripping of life from a victim. The writing brings awful images to my mind even after setting the story aside. I even had bad dreams after reading the first chapter because I knew where this was going.

Having said that, with this story in particular (and only a little less so with the coffee shop series) it hurts to see what’s being done to Lara. I don’t want her to lose this battle. I think I am going to have to give this story up.

I can easily say this; if this genre is your cup of tea then you’ve found a master of it.

UnholywoodUnholywoodabout 6 years ago
Agree with some of the previous comments

The three enemies is a bit much, I guess it makes sense if one of them is in control, and the orhers are there as a smokescreen that he/she can use to manipulate Lara, so I'll wait to see how it plays out.

As for the abscence of hope, that is something that goes wrong in a number of stories - once a character is broken, they become a lot less interesting. The stories have a much better tension when the outcome is in doubt, this one (sadly) looks like it just going to end up with Lara as a crushed and defeated sex toy for the three owners, which really seems to be a waste of building her up as a (wannabe) hero

Regarding the category, I'd guess it was maybe more Non-Con than BDSM, since Lara is in no way a willing participant. The 'Mind Control' is basically breaking someone under physical and mental torture, rather than the usual hypnosis/magic that the category usually relies on, but it can be argued as MC because of reshaping the personality.

masterhobbesmasterhobbesabout 6 years ago
Where's the mind control?

This is a good bdsm story but a shitty mind control one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Lara should be subjected to a long shaping process with subtle forms of pressure

great job. it's good to read

Lara should be subjected to a long shaping process, subtle forms of pressure,

  vision correction is one of the interesting solutions ....

The Institute does not have to use violence and pain to shape Lara ....

all this is mind control, brainwashing, subliminal programming ... new technology

why use the trite ideas with pain and fear

Please continue to work and use subtle forms of pressure. The institute is not a barbarian

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