by Sapphirestrand
Its really good, but its not humor or satire. Probably erotic couplings
Wonderful beginning. You made the reading portion of my day. H&S is the proper category. This story is well written, definitely erotic and quite amusing.
One of the highest compliments I can give your writing is telling you how it reminds me of two of my favorite Literotica authors (George Tasker and seth_perm). I eagerly await the ensuing chapters. Thanks for sharing and have the best day.
Nice start and would like very much to read the rest of the story. I understand laptop problems and am mildly surprised the editors take this length of time to release story. I'll keep my fingers crossed and hope for the best. Cheers.