by Sapphirestrand
Nice start and would like very much to read the rest of the story. I understand laptop problems and am mildly surprised the editors take this length of time to release story. I'll keep my fingers crossed and hope for the best. Cheers.
Wonderful beginning. You made the reading portion of my day. H&S is the proper category. This story is well written, definitely erotic and quite amusing.
One of the highest compliments I can give your writing is telling you how it reminds me of two of my favorite Literotica authors (George Tasker and seth_perm). I eagerly await the ensuing chapters. Thanks for sharing and have the best day.
Its really good, but its not humor or satire. Probably erotic couplings