All Comments on 'Leigh Trains For A Triathlon Pt. 03'

by JohnRocker272

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hugplxhugplxover 1 year ago

lmao

Congratulations. You made a story where I despise everyone equally, that takes some doing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

How shocking you turn main female character into an instant slut and of course strong and moral hubby instantly becomes a weak and worthless cuck. How stupid and unoriginal. Guess it would be tough to write a story about a hubby who isn’t a pathetic cuck and doesn’t want a whore for a wife. Ridiculous

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Your stories are great bro, don't worry about the haters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent, loved all three parts.

Jlyn1Jlyn1over 1 year ago

Hoping for part 4 before commenting.

Want to know Leigh surprise wedding gift.😯

shadrachtshadrachtover 1 year ago

The time jump was too abrupt. The transition felt unearned, and it felt like there should have been more obvious repercussions to leigh than just some off screen changes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love these hateful comments LOL. If you got off to the story and feel disgusted afterwards don't take it out on the author! 5/5 keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Dude first time commenting, THANK YOU! For having them fucking break up no normal man alpha or beta would allow their girl to fucking cheat without breaking up instantly. Well played hopefully more authors realize it's silly to pretend they would stay together after another man's cum is on them regardless of the bet that got it there. 👍

49ers6949ers699 months ago

Very interesting until the very end. Absolutely hated it. I'm more of a happily ever after guy, which probably explains why I feel the way I do. Marrying Steph was idiotic as hell. Ted is a fucking idiot.

DomindiDomindi7 months ago

That end makes zero sense.

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