by JohnRocker272
lmao
Congratulations. You made a story where I despise everyone equally, that takes some doing.
How shocking you turn main female character into an instant slut and of course strong and moral hubby instantly becomes a weak and worthless cuck. How stupid and unoriginal. Guess it would be tough to write a story about a hubby who isn’t a pathetic cuck and doesn’t want a whore for a wife. Ridiculous
The time jump was too abrupt. The transition felt unearned, and it felt like there should have been more obvious repercussions to leigh than just some off screen changes.
I love these hateful comments LOL. If you got off to the story and feel disgusted afterwards don't take it out on the author! 5/5 keep writing!
Dude first time commenting, THANK YOU! For having them fucking break up no normal man alpha or beta would allow their girl to fucking cheat without breaking up instantly. Well played hopefully more authors realize it's silly to pretend they would stay together after another man's cum is on them regardless of the bet that got it there. 👍
Very interesting until the very end. Absolutely hated it. I'm more of a happily ever after guy, which probably explains why I feel the way I do. Marrying Steph was idiotic as hell. Ted is a fucking idiot.