All Comments on 'Leigh Trains For A Triathlon'

Great job!

Looking forward to the continuation :)

While this was hot, Leigh's personality makes it less so.

I just can't stand stupid characters I guess. Kind of rooting for the protag to dump her. Can't stand the intellectual dishonesty. It's worse than if she maliciously cheated on him imo, in terms of her character I guess.

Guessing she’s already given a handjob to Jim, hence Steph’s quick willingness to give. Ick one as payback.

Yeah - agree with hugpix - Leigh is not a character to root for, and the boyfriend is unable to explain the issue here?!

Hope this guy grows a spine

Great story! I really liked it! Can't wait for future chapters!!

Another stupid guy missing a perfect opportunity. Typical.

Love your works. Long life to cheating women.

Best new story on lit! More quick please.

They definitely threw the race to have her make a stupid bet next time…

I wanted to congratulate you on the characters, very well done. I'm no writer but everything felt organic. Again, great job.

Really enjoyed this? Hope the next chapter isn't too far away!

Looking forward to pet 2 of this one.

Excellent story, really like your style and plot development.

Is there going to be a part 2 for this ?

Not a fan of the whole thing being on the BF's POV.

it just feels....less exciting? Less detailed?

I agree with the critiques of hugplx and 300WSM. You have written Leigh to be a narcissistic bitch, and her bf as a wimpy bastard who is not interested in sharing her with others but who doesn't set out the clear boundaries he expects from her. With neither main character being likeable, your tale fails in my humble opinion. 2 stars.

Love it. Great work!