by Dolly2
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-husbands-boss-pt-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/susans-corporate-servitude-pt-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/teacher-upskirt-shows
https://www.literotica.com/s/tiffanys-timidities-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/naive-teacher-in-winston
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=206667&page=submissions
i recommend to you read those novels! of course these are male/female novels. but it will give to you great inspiration about groping, molesting situation!!!
I really recommend it!!!!
Simple typos, bad punctuation, switching from first person to third person narrative, and run on sentences.
The idea of the story is good, but you really need an editor.
3 Stars - and I'm waiting for the day when I can give you five. All that's in your way is attention to detail, and basic writing tools in your toolbox.
My Queen π©πΏ and I π©πΌβ are giving you 5-Stars With Our Thanks!
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Hallo Dolly2!
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Yeah it's short!
Doesn't it seem as if everyone is a critic, I just wonder how many of them could do better, or is it possible there all just like me, unable to write a story even if their lives depended on it!?!
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Your two new kinky dyke friends.
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The Black Queen π©πΏ and Gay kat π©πΌβ!
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