All Comments on 'Lesbians Raping Young Teachers Pt. 01'

by Dolly2

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cnsualsu1cnsualsu1about 2 years ago

oh bro you comeback!!! always thanks!!!!

cnsualsu1cnsualsu1about 2 years ago

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Darkwolf28Darkwolf28about 2 years ago

Hardly worth the effort of opening it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I hope you continue and ignore the patronizing comments from others.

mioelcidmioelcidabout 2 years ago

Waiting next chapter to score.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Simple typos, bad punctuation, switching from first person to third person narrative, and run on sentences.

The idea of the story is good, but you really need an editor.

BortonPadeforBortonPadeforover 1 year ago

3 Stars - and I'm waiting for the day when I can give you five. All that's in your way is attention to detail, and basic writing tools in your toolbox.

GayKatGayKat16 days ago

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Hallo Dolly2!

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Yeah it's short!

Doesn't it seem as if everyone is a critic, I just wonder how many of them could do better, or is it possible there all just like me, unable to write a story even if their lives depended on it!?!

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