All Comments on 'Let Go'

In a time where the first reaction is to throw away whatever causes a bad situation, it is encouraging to see that sometimes, working through the hard times, can be surprisingly beneficial. In this instance, so much life came as a result of the conflict.

Schwanze1 has all sorts of disparaging remarks to make about other peoples writing, and so many ideas about how stories should end, mostly in f*&^ing disasters, but I note that this brilliant author has not submitted one story to this site to be rated against that which he seems to despise. I suppose it is so common, if you can’t do it criticize those who can so you will feel better! Yes, this is a rant. I don’t love every story I read, and I try to be honest in my evaluations, but you can also read my scribbling here to bomb my efforts. If your only talent is crass disparagement then go get a career in demolition, perhaps we will all be fortunate and you will blow yourself up!

I think that the issue here is that too many readers get locked into an early view of who they either think the characters are, or who they want them to be. Then some “Damascus Road” experience happens, altering the trajectory they expect or desire. Yes, in this case the transition could have been made more convoluted, but people do on occasion, see the error of their ways when it is brought rudely to their attention, and in rare instances real change does occur. Then surprisingly good things may follow. Qhml1 followed a path to that end, and did it well, in site of bad editing! Good story, some interesting characters, and I enjoyed it in spite of the distractions of too many lapses of grammar.

I’m thinking take everything liquid and disappear to Ecuador

AC,

Don’t forget, I have high praise for some. Whether or not I write does not validate or invalidate my opinion.

After all, I said great writing did I not Karen?

I could add this guy is clearly a great writer and it may or may not be to my credit but this woman would never get another chance to betray me.

I very much enjoyed this story. Despite the treatment Dave received from Beverly - both professionally and personally... Despite the lack of respect Beverly showed him... because there was no adulterous behavior by either spouse... I always had a feeling that reconciliation was remote possibility . but only if Beverly humbled herself, saw the error of her ways, and began treating Dave with the respect he was due as her spouse. In the end, love is what made it all possible. 5 Stars

Ok so I think the overall story here was pretty good and I don't really have many complaints about this but I'm going to nit pick... because that is the privilege of being an anonymous reviewer.

Firstly the author several times jumps from a third person perspective into a first and it's quite jarring. "She pulled her into our lap"

Secondly I think this author should study female biology a little. Women are perfectly capable of getting pregnant at 38, it's a little old yes but menopause doesn't start until women are usually in their mid to late 40s. And by all accounts Beverly is in Good physical health so while she would have reduced odds of pregnancy at her age its certainly not zero. Also you cannot determine the gender of a baby at 8 weeks. It's sort of possible around 14 weeks but to be sure most doctors aim for around 18 - 21 weeks.

That aside, to all the people out there sating Dave should have divorced Beverly and that RAAC sucks... the story makes it pretty clear from the out set that it's that kind of story and just because you wouldn't have behaved in the same way doesn't mean everyone would. Often relationships are a minefield and I can speak from personal experience that betrayal does not switch off love.

Anyways a good story, could do with better grammar checking and editing. A little more research of female biology too! 4/5

1. First five pages excellent

2. From then on too many perfect situations.

3. The story was over once Beverly was pregnant but the author didn't recognize it.

4. Keep writing, you are good and will get even better.

Nope, not buying any of it, especially the emotional manipulation with the two younger girls. Dave could help take care of them without Beverly. Self-absorbed and useless in a marriage, no way taking her back is a good idea or would turn out how it was written. Not a chance!

Another read of this great story, one of my favorites. I overlook the minor imperfections and unreality of it in places to go along with the general flow of a beautiful love story and how they managed to rescue that love.

Liked the story. Long after reading it for the first time, it strikes me about how corrupt it would be to give someone a sweetheart deal to secure a job for your spouse. Also, that company's President will own her in any future negotiation. He seems like a guy who'd throw her under the bus without a second thought.

Having read (countless times), rated (5⭐️), and favorited this story, it’s still a fun read for me. I read it almost every time it pops up in my feed. It’s a good feel good story, and one I can relate to, having worked for several female bosses and seen first-hand the lengths they’re willing to go to for the position. Also, for the Anonymous commenter wondering about corruption, those deals happen all the time. They don’t violate the laws, so no recourse. Just your reputation if the terms aren’t followed.

This is one of my "comfort" stories. It cheers me up and leaves me on a positive mood without being saccharine. Sometimes, after reading too many other LW stories I need to be cheered up. Thanks.

LMJ

I absolutely loved it. The story was greatly written and it warmed my heart when they decided to adopt the two girls into their family. Being adopted myself, it's really special when you can choose your family

Just finished reading for the third time, I'm always a sucker for a happy ending.

Nope sorry this one doesn't work for me. Not at all. She robbed him of his life, his dreams and there's no way she can give them back to him. He should have divorced her and sued the living shit out of that company, destroying her.

It was a great read, even if it was a very forced RAAC! Never would have happened in the real world. Just too much disrespect shown from Beverly.

Speaking of that, how is it that such a hard charging tough as nails CEO spends most of the story sobbing? And, she is so easily duped by an obvious opportunist. It just defies credibility. 4* because of the entertainment value

Really enjoyed the story!

I enjoyed the story well the first half, but it turned into the 'Beverly takes command' in the second. OK Dave possibly got a little more respect but it was all Beverly did this, Beverly told him to go to church Beverly told Dave to get a car. Hardly the equal partnership was it? Just once I would have liked Dave to be 'all over her' like he said he would be if she acted like that. She really hasn't learned much and Dave is still the doormat.

5 stars for the first half 2 for the second.

great story five stars.

Grab all the money and move to Ecuador day one.

I gave this story 5 stars .. Yes their were some mistakes but everyone makes mistakes ..

For a story that started out so strong and full of promise is went down hill fast. From the 36 being too old to the bizarre and insulting idea of the rich white knight riding in and taking over the lives of those less fortunate... Oh and let's not forget the 18 year old that at times behaves like a preteen. Such a shame as the writing skills are obviously there.

For those of ye keen on perusing the original version of these Wife CEO fires Hubby tales, try looking up M Moreau's "Jill Rodgers and Donald Young".

Another good piece from a Literotica master. Thoroughly enjoyable. BardnotBard

The level of disrespect he got from his wife was not good but please don't remotely compare it to a full fledged affair. Not in the same galaxy of disrespect. If a reader feels she needs to be burned for how she got tricked and played, take a look and ask yourself some pertinent questions about life and relationships. Seriously.

Too bad I can’t give it a 10. So a “golden” 5 will have to suffice. Thank you for sharing your story.

Firstly, a few minor complaints: editing needed, typos, transitions in the dialogue and story, etc.

Not sure why the author thought that 36 is too old to have a child. Many older mums these days wait and still have happy, healthy families.

The story was wonderfully done and really drew the reader in; some of the comments from folks who griped about the issues shows how deeply the story caught their interest.

Thank you for this story. Wonderfully written, nothing over the top and seamlessly told.

Cya,

Tob

Ahhhhh.

The beauty of fiction ..

Though perhaps, additional character depth to understanding the wife could've been added.

Woman in power rarely make good wives even if they make great mother's.

This is my second read and enjoyed it just as much as I did the first read. Great story.

Great Story but, we never find out what she did with the car she bought for him to finish his restoration project and the last page feels rushed. On the second read it feels as like someone took it upon themselves to edit down the story without the author's permission. It's still a good story and with a little work it could be a fantastic story. (The Whoo)

Excellent!

The would up drinking way too much

They wound up drinking way too much

what he had won. he had, without a doubt, destroyed the woman I was supposed to love and support.

what he had won. He had, without a doubt, destroyed the woman he was supposed to love and support.

Not really. he knew how much she loved that job

Not really. He knew how much she loved that job

He stood, placing my hand on her shoulder

He stood, placing his hand on her shoulder

She had let my ego get the best of her

She had let her ego get the best of her

he had bought her the first year we were together

he had bought her the first year they were together

H got his baby settled

He got his baby settled

Marsha had Ari and was waiting with Sol and Susan

Marsha had Ari and were waiting with Sol and Susan

Loved it! You even manage to make Beverly likeable at the end. This is quite an acomplishment, considering how she was at the beginning of the story. 5 stars. Thank you very much!!

What Roktot said, but certianly none of that crap dispensed by The Hypercritics.

I loved it. Thank you for sharing a great story.

It's a very good story, I enjoyed it very much. I felt like Marsha kind of dissappear at the end. I would've enjoyed more interaction and a bigger story between the whole family including the grand children. Still, it was great!

good story but too sweet at the end.

I loved this story and the writer, but I don't understand the frequent references to doubtful pregnancies in the late 30's? She was in her late 30's but she missed the proverbial boat for kids?? I don't get it..this is becoming the new normal for US families concentrating on financial stability before family..( it's a mistake )

Thanks Q for another wonderful story

Opinionated1

Well 1 you need a editor or a better editor at least there was a lot of typos and errors in this story as the story goes it self I can see the point of view from both sides I see her side of things as a former retired business owner myself you do have to do what you feel is best for the company I also see he side of things as well the way she went about firing him was the wrong the way as it went against company policy was he right in going after them for wrongful termination if that was the only reason then yes however it was stated and led to believe that was not the only reason so with that being said no he wasn't while I get there was underlying problems within there marriage to start with he was in the wrong for allowing the event that took place in business part of there life's to determine what took place in their personal life those 2 things should always be kept separate they never mix not even if both parties work together unless both have the same position and pay or both own the business 50/50 however they didn't have those things again i see both sides i have to agree with both views equally when I started my business i didn't have that issue to start with cause i was single when I got married i learned quickly to leave work at work not bring it home then after being married to my wife for like 6 years I signed 50 percent of the business to her that was 17 years ago now in case of a divorce she can get only the worth of half the business which sold for a million so half of that she still works part time for the people that bought us out doing there pay roll and taxes

Love it!

Brilliant! I’m getting soft in my old age. Loved how the love story developed later – how everything worked out for them like a Mills and Boon Novel 5 – Stars!

I enjoyed the story it had a good ending. One thing I did notice was that Dave never found out or Bev never mentioned her date and kiss with Bob after she had fired Dave.

I liked the story, but the perspective changes were jarring as hell. You can't switch from first to second person in one sentence and still be talking about the same person!

One of my all time favorites. Read once or twice a year.

Read again. Helluva story but nauseating at the same time given I identify with the husband. I really think if my wife did that to me I'd have been packed and gone with all the cash before she got home.

Could someone please post a link to the "M Moreau's "Jill Rodgers and Donald Young"" [CEO fired husband] story? Referenced about 25 comments earlier. I've looked everywhere and can't find it!

Brilliant story and well worth a 5 star. Good people who got lost and found their way back.

Loved it absolutely great story,⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Could someone please post a link to the "M Moreau's "Jill Rodgers and Donald Young"" [CEO fired husband] story? Referenced about 25 comments earlier. I've looked everywhere and can't find it!

Matt Moreau . He doesnt seem to be posting here. I found him on a Canadian site of Stories Online

To the Author: nicely done I will read on

I have always loved this story. 5 stars, the Bear always approves of it. But I've often wondered- what kind of car was it, and what happened to it?? It had to have been a Mustang, right?? Please tell me it was a Mustang. I'll read it again, soon.

The BEAR

Great story, would be a great Hallmark TV movie. Only thing what happened to the car he was restoring and Bev bought the wreak?

Thanks for sharing an enjoyable story

Life is always better rich.

If I were Dave I wouldn't have been so forgiving (if at all). However in saying that this is still a well written story and worthy of five stars....

superb story . i used to read it repeatedly.

This IS one of my favorites, and I love it. Between the plot twists, and the parts where my eyes were leaking (page 7&8). It's also so well written, that it's believable (could happen in real life). Make no mistake Q can tell a story. :-)

I initially disliked the mega-bitch CEO, but then I couldn't help but like her and wanted her to succeed. She simply had lost her way and, once she realised what was truly important to her, she fought tooth and nail to get it back. A great journey. And rather believable, too.

At the end it all came rushing forward with those advancing snapshots of their lives. It was kind of overwhelming. Many tears of joy were shed. :) So glad everything worked out for them in the end. It very nearly didn't.

Didn’t she buy a front bumper for a car he was restoring

Man, I thought this story would never end! The author had a really good thing going but couldn’t figure out how to get off stage.

Another thing, every chairman of the board loves it when his CEO of a struggling division breaks down and cries at every turn. It’s a real confidence booster. Still AA good read 4*

This was a great story, well-written, with well-developed characters, and was a reconciliation story which is rare here on Literotica. As I read this story I looked back on our marriage and my traveling to Las Vegas six times a year for week-long visits as different shows required my attendance. I could see that, at times, I lost sight of the main goal which was my wife and our two children. We made it through these tough times and are now blessed with two lovely daughters-in-law and four grandchildren. We are very thankful and see this story as a cautionary tale for many career-oriented couples out there. Five stars, for sure

And still one of my favorites, makes me feel good and tear up all at once. Good work, Thanks.

I can’t help but wonder how many of these positive comments would be different if the CEO was male and the victim was female. There was no growth in Beverly’s character. What did she give up to prove she was worthy of his trust? The whole excuse for Dave and her getting back together was weak. The older sister was an adult and would have been granted custody of the younger one with or without Beverly.

I lost count of how many times I have come back to this story and every time it’s as emotionally draining as the first but in a good way. There are some stories that just resonate with me and this definitely makes that list. I wish there were more stories that felt like this to me but then I guess these few wouldn’t feel so incredibly special.

I come back to this periodically because qhml1 is one of the best authors on the site, and I keep hoping I'll catch something I missed. Sadly, hasn't happened again. This female lead was written with absolutely no redeeming qualities, and never experienced any self-awareness. No reason on earth, except maybe laziness, the male lead should roll over and go back to beingabused.

This wonderful story should be on the silver screen or at least a good hallmark tale. It moved me in a way none of these other tales have. You put feeling and raw emotion in a way that few can. Keep up your great work.

Love the story and the plot. The several instances of changing perspective in the middle of a sentence sets my teeth grinding, though. Wish you'd edit it and resubmit?

Reread. Hey Whatever happened to the bumper cover?????!

@RePhil:

What was the writer thinking?

Bumper covers are a recent model car thing, classic cars have real bumpers.

Nice. A little American excessive indulgence.

It started off good then became a jumbled mess. Not surprising since the majority of the Literotica writers seem to fail a storytelling.

Boy, wish I could edit this story, for all the perspective changes in middle of the sentence. Very annoying to have to parse a sentence when reading. On a more enjoyable note, I've read this story 4 or 5 times, and thoroughly enjoy. 5 stars from me, just to keep consistency.

I get hacked off when people complain about grammar, punctuation, spelling and most any thing else. Academics don't live in the real word just in print. A lot of people with hidden disabilities would read straight though this with no trouble. Where as if it was written in academic style they would have great difficulty reading it. I read this with no issue so it says a lot about me.

I enjoyed reading this heart wrenching, heart warming, story of human failings and recovery. Thanks and five stars for sharing your talent.

I was in the corporate world for over 40 years and saw this occur many times sad to say. Both women and men basically gave their spouses away chasing not the almighty dollar but power. An old exec friend of mine who was my mentor said to me early in my career take care of your family and friends, watch those who don't go from he is here to who is he. I never forgot that lesson.

After several readings I can honestly say that I love your take on this story.

But what the fuck is an "age appropriate group" when it comes to religion?

Page two. The flipping POVs is very disconcerting.

JPB

I have to admit that this is one of my favorite stories. However, one of the things that stick in my craw is how she violated both company policy and good management by firing him against policy. For a CEO? Not ever happening. Too much experience climbing the ladder.

I realize that this type of Let Go story demands a bad business decision in firing the hubby. But every one has the same flaw of violating policy in the terminations.

I have read this story enough times that I will not read further this time and go looking for something more interesting.

JPB

Great Story!! Loved it!!

Great story, best of the many versions of this tale. Q can tell a story with the best of all LW writers.

4th time reading and still 1 of my all-time favorites!

My third or fourth time on this one, and it always brings tears to my eyes. Trials and tribulations haunt us thru our passage thru this life. Hopefully they balance out. All decisions have consequences and as we get older some of those decisions were regretful and others were good. This story brought all that out and MC couple fought hard to get back to where they should have been. Sometimes we learn too late about what's important as this story points out. Is it just a fairy tale or part of reality? 10 stars if I had them!

There were ALOT of grammar problems in this story. You kept saying I or me whenever a character was thinking or something was happening.

But it was fine nonetheless. It even brought a tear to my eye a few times.

On a scale of one to ten, this is a twenty!!

Read again. From an older perspective, this story really did get the business side right. Note to young couples, never work for the same company unless it is your company. First part, she seemed like something of a narcissist. Apparently she wasn't, judging by the rest of the story, since a narcissist could never do what she did. I've raised my score for this story. A lot. Really was a helluva story. Were I the husband, the second half would never have happened. Too much Scotch Irish Norse in me. I would have been LONG gone when she got home from work day one. But that's perhaps not to my credit.

Great.

Great.

Pretty good, the changes in pov were a bit distracting, and I kinda zined out/glossed over the church rubbish. But, solid work.

Great job !

I think this was my third or even fourth time reading this story. Still had me angry at times, smiling like a loon a paragraph or two later, and trying to read with happy tears a few after that. To me, that's the kind of story that we need more of in Loving Wives. Sure, we all like the BtB (m/f/o) stories, but sometimes you just need something like this: the comfy blanket, hot cocoa and a hug from a big ol' teddy bear. Pure Hallmark. Perfect for this time of year (2023-12-18)

I think that you missed your calling. The author should have written Hallmark specials, or lifetime for women...

That being said, it was positive and uplifting. But real life, is not so clean. I don’t think wifey would have changed her spots. She had an alpha personality, and I don’t see it ending anytime soon. The husband was more laid back, but he wanted and needed social interaction, so why would he put himself back in a situation with a ball cracking bitch? The two if them were mismatched. And the humiliation he suffered by her firing and publicly demeaning him, would have been the end of the relationship for any sane man. Sorry, to burst the bubble...

Wow, this is such a nice story. And I'm glad that it ended like this. With them getting back together plus adopting the 2 sisters. I shed a couple of tears reading this.

i thought it was a pretty good story...Cinco Estrellas!

Good tale, Five Stars.

I usually don't bother with stories this long, but I have to admit I got hooked early. Great character progression, redemption and reconciliation!

While a little on the long side for a single story, it was well worth it. I haven’t read any of your other stories, but I f you do something this long again I would recommend breaking it into parts.

The story was excellent, and definitely ahead of its time as far as work/personal life balance. The only thing I noticed was that you seemed to slip into first person (me,my, I) on occasion. Other than that, 5 stars.

Can't win when you are a writer - readers like it or don't; story is to short or too long; etc. Q is my favorite writer, I've read nearly everything - multiple times, this story is no exception. With 800 mostly positive comments I must not be alone. 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

Or he found a sweet young latina with a young child whose husband had died in the sandbox.After his divorce, he saved her and she saved him adoring him treating him like a king the rest of his life while he did his best to treat her even better. He rarely thought of his ex wife and when he did he was amazed by how good it was to be treated like a man by a wonderful woman.