All Comments on 'Liberty Summer Ch. 08'

Excellent

So, how many people have you pissed off to get these low scores.

I’ve taught composition and creative writing for a full career, and I can tell the wheat from the chaff with a quick glance. You are a very good writer, and while the plot of this story is a bit “out there” you’ve skillfully delineated these characters, not making them caricatures.

Keep writing.