by NorthernNewEnglandGuy
Great chapter! Fun and games in Appleton. Thanks for the mention of the Old Man.
5
This is a fun story. A good story lie and character development. I am enjoying it. Thanks
You introduce a character I immediate dislike, and get rid of him in three pages. What fun!!!
THANKS
As always, such enjoyable, and talented writing. I love this series, and I always look forward to the next chapter! 5*