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Some odd word choices (preamble) and some wrong ones.

"my erection literally spangled from my gym shorts."

span·gle

/ˈspaNGɡ(ə)l/

verb

past tense: spangled; past participle: spangled

cover with spangles or other small sparkling objects or lights.

"stars spangled the moonless sky"

His cock did not spangle.

Punctuation also needs work.

Welp, looks like I missed one. I'll definitely have it fixed. Still working on being better at writing.