All Comments on 'Lily Pt. 02'

Okay, this is too dumb and ridiculous for anyone sane.

I love both of the stories that you are writing, so hot and so well developed

i like it.. continue please

it just keeps getting better

keep up the good work

the findom and control she's taking is good

Incredibly hot! Please continue his downfall. Would love to see what the breakup message is! 5*****

Great so far. I wish he didn't have to break up with his girlfriend yet, there could have been some great scenes there first.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Christ! This is so hot. I keeo checking for part 3 everyday other day. I love how she asked him to break up with his gf and he was mindless in subspace and complied! Simply incredible.

Please put more cuckold element!

Good premise.

But still all it is is preliminaries.

Three stars.

don't know why folks saying it.s hot, I think it is a good start up but , I yet to see that. 3stars and I am being nice at that.

Pappasleaze!

OMG! So hot! I came without even touching myself reading how Davide is going to breakup with his girlfriend of three years through a text because Lily told him to.