All Comments on 'Lily's First Valentine's'

Good story!

5

Love Emma and Lily, and agree it is nice to hear Lily's voice.

Em, you have such a delightful way of writing, and making us smile

Your Ai images of these two compliment the story so well.

This was a sweet tale with just a nice light touch for the ending. Heavier on the sex at the beginning and light titillation at the end. No need for raucous wack sounds on that heart-shaped paddle. Just a note: somewhere along the way, one commenter explained that 'glans' should be 'glan', and I tucked that away in memory. I spotted it in your story today and smiled. A tinge of angel editing floated into my mind. Great work angel.

5 Stars!! I loved how it was divided into sections... And I'm a Lily fan anyway, so... 🥰

I also love the smell of aroused pussy. But smelling pussy with feline sense of smell? Girl, you have got a wicked imagination. Well done.

So hot and rampant. Love the variety and energy. Very sexy.

Apologies - I’ve not been around. I normally reply to each comment individually. Can I please be excused a group “thank you?” Em

Reading as you wrote is pretty much all I did; the fun imagination part is all you.

Really enjoyed hearing Lily's voice this time. So sweet and innocent yet still a dirty little angel 😇 💗

@Djmac1031 - thank you 😊 Emma and Lily are both fun to write, but in different ways. Em

I really enjoyed this. It's great to hear from Lily, sometimes. She's as funny as fudge...so much so that it's got me in the Valentine mood early!

@Anon - it’s fun to write both Emma and Lily - it was just so random coming up with the idea. But I’m glad that I did. 😊 Em

Utterly delightful.

@Anon - that makes me 😊 to hear 🙏 Em

Loved it. Written in the witty, playful, charming, always sexy, and creative personal style of the author. A bit surprised it didn’t rate higher.

@steelyblue73 - thank you 🙏 Glad you liked it. I like it too 😊 Em