All Comments on 'Lisa's Journey'

Oh my Gawd!!!!! More, More, More, please? Soon!

5⭐️s

Fantastic story. The realistic tone just increases the eroticism. There's a lot of room to explore as Lisa goes down the rabbit hole of submission.

Wow smoking hot! Thanks for sharing!

I hope you continue with this one, I'd love to see it lean in to far more control and micromanagement of Lisa by Kylee

Thank you for the wonderful story. Please continue this journey. The characters have so much potential, especially with your creative abilities.

I love your writing style and the content. I have found a new favorite Author. Thanks for writing.

This was hot. Keep this going!!

Well done. This has long run potential. Maybe it's time for mistress to control when wife gets to cum?

Oh WOW! The story over all was just HOT. But the scene with Kylee and lisa was incredible. Hope to see more of Lisa's journey soon. after all there are still more rooms in the house as well as other imaginal places Kylee can take lisa and a lot more that she can make her do. 5/5 stars because that is all I am allowed to give.

Fantastic story, can’t wait for part two.

This was amazing. The humiliation and degradation are wonderful. Don't let her get used to it. It should continue to be incisive and impactful.

Looking forward to additional parts.

This story is one of my favorite fantasies and this is an excellent read. Needless to say it requires a followup. My fantasies must be fed.

Wonderfully crafted story as you have more to build on. Lisa’s submission and Kylee’s domination were hit

EXCELLENT!!! Your characters are all likeable and believable, which is a great combination!!! And the dinner table feast will be remembered as an all time favorite!!

Hot. I love it

Another great story,