All Comments on 'Little Cherub'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Yes!!!

Please, part 2. I don’t know where to take it, but find a way to fix it.

Thanks, 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Great story, love the ENM SPH genre. I prefer shorter stand alone stories over longer multi part series because the embarrassment somehow feels stronger if it only escalates once in the story's universe. Hope you write more stories.

screedbearscreedbearalmost 4 years ago
Good Story

Better then your raring

FoundationMasterFoundationMasteralmost 4 years ago

Sorry I never commented. I think a second part to this would work well, but I also think this works best as a stand alone story to flesh out the world for the main series. No issues though I think this is a better story than the rating. I always enjoy the build-up you create to the embarrassments. It makes the payoff worth while.

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Into magic, sph, humiliation and gay themed works. Always open to constructive criticism or ideas for where you'd like a story to go