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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Best I've read in a long while. You got me going.

If I could change anything it would be to lose the recap of the first part. Just tell them to read the first part, and tell them they won't regret it. The recap really drags things down. And keep writing. This could develop into a lot more. Thanks.

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