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- COMMENTS
NoBullAl13 days agoCouldn’t decide whether Henry is a wimp or just plain dumb! A truly thinking real MAN would have drawn a line…. “You move and you’re out! I love you but screwing or no screwing someone else will means there just plain ain’t no coming back!”
phill1c23 days agoGetting an apartment is pretty much saying, "I'm going away to fuck." I mean, that's what it's meant for MANkind as long as apartments have existed. Ridiculous. Draw up the papers before leaving because you aint MY wife letting mofos play grab ass. WTF u think this is!!
DormayVoo3 months agoHmmm…. A few paragraphs in, and she’s 44 years old. A few paragraphs later she’s 45. She ages quickly in this story.
Anonymous5 months agoDemander kept straight with the weakish man; all his wife had to do was give him her body & she's at least somewhat good. No matter what. She came back to him (inviting him into her apartment) ONLY because the other guys turned scared of him.
Any MAN, not male, would tell her when she said she wants some "freedom" living solo that she'll get a lot of freedom living solo because their marriage will did when she moves out; it's on life support with just her suggestion.
The doctor she went to... totally unprofessional. Even the story being fiction, make the players within believable. The doctor wasn't, the wife less so. Last dumb-assed story I read by this author that loves a somewhat wimpish man. 2 stars Bob
trucker19656 months agoJust way to much forced bs going on. All the characters are forced, you could remove Brad, Dane and Faith and not lose anything from the story.
You had a good idea and plot line going until Etta moved into her own apartment and you started to stumble. Sherri showed up and it went off the rails after that.
Anonymous8 months agoYour style of writing makes me uncomfortable. It’s as realistic (aside from the Henry Cavill stand in) as can be expected but unsettling. I don’t know if women think the way that your female protagonists do, but if they do, I’m a bit apprehensive.
While I truly do enjoy BTB stuff, and abhor cuckold stories, I don’t understand the baying for blood here. Imagine opening yourself to someone so utterly and completely and having an unanticipated issue. The author grappled with hard subject matter.
Anonymous10 months agoIt was a good story about temptation but that final paragraph just killed the whole lesson of it;Marian cheating on her husband? Why not just leave?
Anonymous10 months agoEtta cheated by kissing other men and wouldve went further. Women who want to live apart for a break will cheat or have cheated its better to divorce and get on with your life.
usaret11 months agoBasic story was good, even more so in some area’s. But right at the end FTER Henry lost his cool with Etta screwing around after the gym, it seemed as though the author just got tired of the whole damn thing. Disappointing.
