by oldtruckdriver
I love the story line from your first chapter.. The s n m from this chapter didn't seem to fit well. But I look forward to chapter six.
In Chapter 4 Karin's daughter was Pati or Patricia. Here she's Bea or Beatriz?
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Also, I don't understand why Valentina becomes Vale and not Val. The name is similar in pronunciation in English and Spanish. With the e on the end it makes the "a" a hard "a" like the "a" in tale...
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Interesting story.