All Comments on 'Living with Rachael Pt. 03'

Outstanding! I do wish Andrew had officially been broken up with before the sexy times started, because being cheated on sucks, and I don't think he deserved that. That's my only critique.

I like the dialogue, the descriptions, and I really appreciate that you tell about the scenes in a way that keeps me aware of where everybody is, and that's tricky in a threesome scene. Hope these chapters continue, and let me know if you want an editor. Peace-And-Love on FetLife or PM me.