by m_storyman_x
So, is the main character Bobby or Billy? There seems to be some confusion at times.
Can't decide how to rate this one. I have conflicted thoughts about it though still very curious where the story will end.
I'm glad you added some meat and potatoes to your story. Keeps it interesting. 5stars
This series is so fucking hot! I can't wait until the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!
Did you consider an alternative “ending” where Jack threatens to expose Coach/Billy. But in exchange for his discretion the entire cheer team gives him a “party” on the mats.
Glad it's acknowledge that the Coach is a sexual predator, and that (generally) the adults take the situation seriously. Always happy to see a story acknowledge the power differential and that the laws are there to protect the students (or minors) even if they want the sex.
Definitely hoping for a minimum of one more chapter . . . Suppose there could be quite a few more chapters to take up the remainder of the school year. After all, if it is still high school football season, that means it is only about late October or early November so lots of time for hijinks over Thanksgiving, Christmas, New Years and Spring vacation as well as a new coach, basketball season . . .
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Agree with others that Jack could be persuaded to cease the rumors or perhaps other rumors could be spread that Jack lost Becky because he was very unacceptable perhaps even gay. Rumors can be such nasty thinks . . .
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Name confusion of Billy / Bobby was annoying. Any proof-reader should have caught that.
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Don't particularly like all the references to the legal ramifications about all the screwing around between staff and students (all over 18). Sure, I understand the dynamic is power skewed but think just the simple ramifications of distinguishing between moral right and wrong should typically preclude such liaisons (although plenty of news stories indicate that not even legal penalties are deterring teacher / student hook-ups) And what about all the incestuous and young man/ much older women hook-ups? Much discussion to be had there if people want to go there.
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Hope the author adds a least one more chapter to fill in the repercussion details.