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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wait, so they finally confront Jim and Tara's feelings, but it happens basically offscreen?! Please tell me we're soon gonna get a chapter from Jim's point of view where they finally sort out this mess...

Architect theArchitect theabout 1 year ago

Not bad. It did feel like very stereotype-y, but without using that to any humorous or plot driven effect. I really do hope to see Jim and Tara's reunion on-screen as it were.

This is an excellent series, I can't wait to see more.

SomeoneblueSomeoneblueabout 1 year agoAuthor

The next chapter will explain all…

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hilarious and heartfelt

rubberbatrubberbat4 months ago

I usually never comment on stories, but I just had to tell you, this is way too good for literotica. Well done. I'm looking forward to the next (last?) chapter.

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