All Comments on 'Looking Up Pt. 03'

Hard and aching

Tedious :(

Weak compared to the first two chapters. Just some nudity and a boring, drawn out conversation...You can do better.

Gud my love, don't listen to the anonymous assholes who hide behind their computer screens eating Cheetos while they wank off, wondering why their tiny worthless virgin cocks are turning orange. Incels all of them. Only should allow comments from people who aren't afraid to sign their names, lowering your average on purpose because the lil skinheads only chance to ever get a bj is from another incel. I can't wait for your next chapter love. xoxo-cia

Loved it! It felt very close to heart like it was something that actually happened to you or close to it. Great writing!