All Comments on 'Losing Control Feels Good Pt. 02'

Fantastic internal dialogue. I'm a male and I could understand Camille's feelings about Stella and Sam. Her jealousy yet enchantment about the two of them was stirring. However, did her feelings about the two of them transfer to the possibility that the two females may have a thing for each other? The sense of wanting to see Stella with Sam shines through, but the sense of a one-on-one between females is not hidden from this reader. All of my ramblings mean that your writing has drawn me into the story because it is excellent. You have a way with words

that enables me to feel the feelings.