All Comments on 'Love & War Ch. 02'

There's a lot of telling instead of showing going on here. I'm sure you can do better if you keep writing.

yeah, idk what to make of this story...in the end I just didn't feel that the characters got along...

Author, not everything you write has to be posted. If the characters don't work for you, they won't work for the readers either. Posting for the sake of posting is not doing you or us any favors. We'd rather have fewer stories with higher quality than a lot of low quality stories.